Mrs Parker said :-) then added - just quickly triple check the punctuation of the speech marks Annah. The question mark and full stops need to be inside and just in front of the closing speech marks.
WALT:Use speech marks correctly
The girls were speechless as Buddy danced around the room to the song “Girls Just Want to Have Fun.” Good-day ladies ”, said Buddy. “I’ve found these keys one with a star and one with a flower but I don’t now what they for?” “That’s for the star room“ said Annah. “And that’s for the flower forest” said Tayla.
Mrs Parker wrote: I am really looking forward to watching your PickaPath, Annah. Some editing points: Is Buddy asking about what they keys are for? If so put a comma after Buddy's name and run the rest of his dialogue after the comma. Also that sentence needs a question mark. At the end of every section of speech check that there is a full stop before the speech mark and after the speaker.
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WALT:Use speech marks correctly
The girls were speechless as Buddy danced around the room to the song “Girls Just Want to Have Fun.” Good-day ladies ”, said Buddy “I’ve found these keys one with a star and one with a flower but I don’t now what they for” “That’s for the star room “ said Annah “And that’s for the flower forest” said Tayla.
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Mrs Parker said :-) then added - just quickly triple check the punctuation of the speech marks Annah. The question mark and full stops need to be inside and just in front of the closing speech marks.
WALT:Use speech marks correctly
The girls were speechless as Buddy danced around the room to the song “Girls Just Want to Have Fun.” Good-day ladies ”, said Buddy.“I’ve found these keys one with a star and one with a flower but I don’t now what they for?”
“That’s for the star room“ said Annah.
“And that’s for the flower forest” said Tayla.
Mrs Parker wrote: I am really looking forward to watching your PickaPath, Annah. Some editing points: Is Buddy asking about what they keys are for? If so put a comma after Buddy's name and run the rest of his dialogue after the comma. Also that sentence needs a question mark. At the end of every section of speech check that there is a full stop before the speech mark and after the speaker.
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WALT:Use speech marks correctly
The girls were speechless as Buddy danced around the room to the song “Girls Just Want to Have Fun.” Good-day ladies ”, said Buddy“I’ve found these keys one with a star and one with a flower but I don’t now what they for”
“That’s for the star room “ said Annah
“And that’s for the flower forest” said Tayla.